Thanks for correction of my mistakes.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi. Monica
Last class I really wanted to tell you about the story of 'Malena' very well.
Because it is a wonderful movie and I would recommend to you to watch.
As I mentioned, the main actoress is Monica Bellucci.
She was amazingly beautiful on the movie.
The theme music director is Ennio Morricone.
The music was totally matched with the movie.
The story, the scenery and the music are all perfect.
You should watch the movie.
Last class I really wanted to tell you about the story of 'Malena' very well.
Because it is a wonderful movie and I would recommend to you to watch.
As I mentioned, the main actoress is Monica Bellucci.
She was amazingly beautiful on the movie.
The theme music director is Ennio Morricone.
The music was totally matched with the movie.
The story, the scenery and the music are all perfect.
You should watch the movie.
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