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Thanks for correction of my mistakes.

작성자: 1100105904 담당 튜터: Monica
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi. Monica
Last class I really wanted to tell you about the story of 'Malena' very well.
Because it is a wonderful movie and I would recommend to you to watch.
As I mentioned, the main actoress is Monica Bellucci.
She was amazingly beautiful on the movie.
The theme music director is Ennio Morricone.
The music was totally matched with the movie.
The story, the scenery and the music are all perfect.
You should watch the movie.
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Hi. -hello!

Monica Last class I really wanted to tell you about the story of 'Malena' very well. Because it is a wonderful movie and I would recommend to you to watch.

-> Monica, last class I really wanted to tell you about the story of 'Malena' very well.   because it is a wonderful movie and I would recommend this movie to you to watch.

As I mentioned, the main actoress is Monica Bellucci.

-> As I mentioned, the main actoress is Monica Bellucci.

She was amazingly beautiful on the movie.

-> She was is amazingly beautiful on the movie.

The theme music director is Ennio Morricone.

-> The theme music director is Ennio Morricone.

The music was totally matched with the movie.

-> The music was totally matched with the movie scenes.

The story, the scenery and the music are all perfect. -good!

You should watch the movie. -ok!

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Hi HJ!  i really enjoyed listening to you at that time. The main actress has the same name with me so I guess it is quite intriguing. I would love to watch it and I am planning to look for a copt this weekend. I just hope I would find one with English titles, though. I do not totally understand Italian! Thanks for sharing!

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