Hi! This is Choi.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hello This Choi.
Thanks for your consideration in our last night class.
I told you that I went to mortuary with my wife to worship for the dead.
Actually, one of my Church member's mother passed away at three days before today.
She had a big disease and struggled against very long time.
We arrived the room, and observed a little while silence in memory of the deceased.
After that, We made a deep bow face to face the son who's mother died.
And also, We gave the words comfort to his family.
When every Church members arrived, we worshiped for the dead.
My wife and I got very sorrowful but got meaningful time.
Teacher!
We are all mortal. I thought deeply about 'How do I live?' and 'What is the purpose of my life?'
When I will have to face with death someday... What kinds of memory do I have to show God?
Thank you for reading.
Bye Teacher.
Thanks for your consideration in our last night class.
I told you that I went to mortuary with my wife to worship for the dead.
Actually, one of my Church member's mother passed away at three days before today.
She had a big disease and struggled against very long time.
We arrived the room, and observed a little while silence in memory of the deceased.
After that, We made a deep bow face to face the son who's mother died.
And also, We gave the words comfort to his family.
When every Church members arrived, we worshiped for the dead.
My wife and I got very sorrowful but got meaningful time.
Teacher!
We are all mortal. I thought deeply about 'How do I live?' and 'What is the purpose of my life?'
When I will have to face with death someday... What kinds of memory do I have to show God?
Thank you for reading.
Bye Teacher.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!