My Mom
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hi Emily
It was same as usal. I think everyday is same day.
One day seems long to me but a week passes fast and one month passes faster.
I can't think time go away so fast.
I've been married for ten years , my son becomes 11 years old boy and I'm at middle of 40.
Yesterday I went to my mom's house in Daejon. It take 2 hours to go by car.
It was two month since I saw my mom. She is getting older and weaker.
When I was young boy, I was afraid of her because my mom was very strict with us.
But nowadays she just looks like a little and old woman.
It makes me unhappy.
2 weeks ago, She fell over while she was taking walk in play ground of element school near her house and her left arms's broken. My mom was nonetheless cooking foods for me.
My mom's cook is the most delicious to me in the world.
So I eat too much and I had to have medicine for digestion.
My father-in-law got Alzheimer’s disease a few month ago and last month he had to go care center.
Last Sunday, he went to the hospital by emblunce. his temperature was three degrees above normal.
Doctor said that's beacause Alzheimer’s disease made his ablitity to swallow food.
and Some food went to his lung and it made his temperature higer than normal.
He is still at the hospital.
I know Men has to get old and die some day.
Today I can't help stop thinking death and life.
It was same as usal. I think everyday is same day.
One day seems long to me but a week passes fast and one month passes faster.
I can't think time go away so fast.
I've been married for ten years , my son becomes 11 years old boy and I'm at middle of 40.
Yesterday I went to my mom's house in Daejon. It take 2 hours to go by car.
It was two month since I saw my mom. She is getting older and weaker.
When I was young boy, I was afraid of her because my mom was very strict with us.
But nowadays she just looks like a little and old woman.
It makes me unhappy.
2 weeks ago, She fell over while she was taking walk in play ground of element school near her house and her left arms's broken. My mom was nonetheless cooking foods for me.
My mom's cook is the most delicious to me in the world.
So I eat too much and I had to have medicine for digestion.
My father-in-law got Alzheimer’s disease a few month ago and last month he had to go care center.
Last Sunday, he went to the hospital by emblunce. his temperature was three degrees above normal.
Doctor said that's beacause Alzheimer’s disease made his ablitity to swallow food.
and Some food went to his lung and it made his temperature higer than normal.
He is still at the hospital.
I know Men has to get old and die some day.
Today I can't help stop thinking death and life.
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