Playing Game_20150116
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Playing game is a fun activity if we do it in the playground. Nowadays playing game no more considered as a physical exercise, but it became the online game to our mind. The smart phone or tablet has been distributed to almost everywhere, not only to teenagers but also to all other generations. Therefore the online game could be developed dramatically, and we could easily find then on play store or app store at the smart phone.
Personally I am rarely playing online-game using personal device since I feel an eye pain when I stare the smart phone screen. However, I play game for the learning purpose. Yo-Yo-English game is one of my favorite games, and which helped me to improve a language skill a lot. It provides a variety of contents for memorizing words and sentence.Even though I am not a huge fan of online game, I strongly recommend if someone is looking for fun game for learning English.
Personally I am rarely playing online-game using personal device since I feel an eye pain when I stare the smart phone screen. However, I play game for the learning purpose. Yo-Yo-English game is one of my favorite games, and which helped me to improve a language skill a lot. It provides a variety of contents for memorizing words and sentence.Even though I am not a huge fan of online game, I strongly recommend if someone is looking for fun game for learning English.
튜터 교정 답변
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