My Instroduction.

My Introduction

Hi. This is my first time to write down about myself on this board. I am just wondering whether or not It works. My writing skills are poor, so I have to practice a lot. As you know I just turned 30. I believe that It is so important to prepare for my 30s. That why I am writing in English. Actually I am expected a lot for my 50's. How will I grow up? Where will I live? Who will I be with? I am probably afraid of my future because the society of my country has made me think like this, but I have pride in myself. I said to my friends that life is like a novel written by yourself, so you can not know the conclusion of the novel.The one thing you have to know is that only you can make the story. It is so important. You should trust yourself. Thank you.

Great job! You wrote very well. There were just a few minor errors in word choice and order, but in general, it was great! Keep up the great work!