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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 03. 13 조회 12575

It's a comedy.

작성자: 70495 담당 튜터: Mitch
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It's a comedy.

First,
....
You asked me "What are you going to do this weekend?"
I answered "I will go to the country side with my family"
You asked "Where ?"
I answered "Around Seoul."
(The mean is this, "It's Near the Seoul, 1 hour distance by car from Seoul".)
You thought "Seoul is big city, Is Soule countryside? ?? ??".

Second,
You asked me "What's your favorite and least favorite movies ?"
(I didn't understood the mean of "least favorite".)
So I answered "My favorite is Action..."
You think "??"

We're talking at cross purposes.
It's a funny time.

If you post this recording contents on the U-tube,
Too many persons will be laughing.

thanks.
from Your foolish student.
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CORRECTIONS:

It's a comedy. First, you asked me "What are you going to do this weekend?" I answered "I will go to the countryside with my family." You asked "Where?" I answered "around Seoul." (What I mean is this, "It's near to Seoul, it takes 1 hour by car from Seoul".) You thought "Seoul is a big city, is Soul a countryside?" Second, you asked me "What's your favorite and least favorite movies?" (I didn't understand the meaning of "least favorite".) So I answered "My favorite is action..." You think? " We're talking differently about the lesson. It's a funny time. If you post this recording contents on You Tube, too many persons will be laughing. Thanks. From: Your foolish student.

COMMENT:

Hi there, Jun! Frankly speaking, I don't agree with you. For me, I don't think it's funny. How could I laugh at my student's mistake. If I do that, what kind of teacher I am. If you're going to post this on You Tube; yes probably some people will laugh but some people might think that I'm not a good teacher for I wasn't able to teach you well. Don't think of yourself as a foolish person because you're not. I suggest that you should continue studying and practicing the English language a lot to help you improve your fluency. Also, you should listen to lots of English songs, news and podcast to further develop your listening and comprehension skills. Keep it up!

Have a nice day,

Teacher Mitch

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