Hello. Monica
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Did you have a good weekend?
I went to a concert hall with my daughter to see a musical 'Pinocchio' last Sunday.
The acting and stage facility were good and the music was familiar to us.
So we enjoyed very well.
Futhermoer we could take a picture with actors after the performance.
On my way home, my dauchter kept asking the story with full of joy.
It was great experience for me to share something valuable with my daughter.
From now on, I wll try to get oppotunities like this.
Anyway see you.
I went to a concert hall with my daughter to see a musical 'Pinocchio' last Sunday.
The acting and stage facility were good and the music was familiar to us.
So we enjoyed very well.
Futhermoer we could take a picture with actors after the performance.
On my way home, my dauchter kept asking the story with full of joy.
It was great experience for me to share something valuable with my daughter.
From now on, I wll try to get oppotunities like this.
Anyway see you.
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