My weekend
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
My weekend
i usually rest my home on weekends.
because i dislike go outdoor due to tired.
there is notihing like a good sleep to relieve the stress.
but sometimes i used to shopping center for my wife
there is notihing like a shopping and talking to relieve the my wife stress.
my wife likes small-talk to me about coworkers
problem is a long time..
wife is a energizer ( energizer battery made by energizer company. energizer battery have a long life)
when i am shopping and small-talk with my wife i am too much like hard work. Hmm....
So when i stay at home on weekends, i am avoiding my wife at home..
i will go my home-town on this weekends with my wife. because perform ancestral rites to grandmother
it take almost 3 hour at home-town.
if i dont go shopping center. i should be walk on eggshells around my wife.
i usually rest my home on weekends.
because i dislike go outdoor due to tired.
there is notihing like a good sleep to relieve the stress.
but sometimes i used to shopping center for my wife
there is notihing like a shopping and talking to relieve the my wife stress.
my wife likes small-talk to me about coworkers
problem is a long time..
wife is a energizer ( energizer battery made by energizer company. energizer battery have a long life)
when i am shopping and small-talk with my wife i am too much like hard work. Hmm....
So when i stay at home on weekends, i am avoiding my wife at home..
i will go my home-town on this weekends with my wife. because perform ancestral rites to grandmother
it take almost 3 hour at home-town.
if i dont go shopping center. i should be walk on eggshells around my wife.
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