self-introcuction
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I grew up as the second of four children and only a gril. I was very independent.
And When I got to school, I was active in literary circles.
I have read a lot of books, I was impressed.
I most memorable book is The Great Gatsby. This book is a love stroy of a man.
After all, the man did not get the love. But I have been a big impression on the man's innocence.
I usually read two books a month.
I read a book at lunch time at work, read in a subway commute.
That's all.
And When I got to school, I was active in literary circles.
I have read a lot of books, I was impressed.
I most memorable book is The Great Gatsby. This book is a love stroy of a man.
After all, the man did not get the love. But I have been a big impression on the man's innocence.
I usually read two books a month.
I read a book at lunch time at work, read in a subway commute.
That's all.
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