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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 02. 06 조회 13221

eat out dinner

작성자: igotoo 담당 튜터: Emily2
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I'm eating out dinner with my family.
It's friday. I had to wait for 40 minutes.
because there're a lot of people.
I went to the restaurant after work.
I had to excercised at lunch time. but I think I excercised too much. So I was sleepy and tired in all of the afternoon.
next time I won't excercised at lunch time.

today dinner is shabu-shabi?
Do you know it?
Have you ever eaten shabu-shabu?

shabu-shabu is a japanese dish.
you eat thinly sliced beef boiled in water.
튜터 교정 답변

I ate dinner out with my family. It's Friday. I had to wait for 40 minutes because there were a lot of people. I went to the restaurant after work. I exercised during lunch time but I think I excercised too much. I was sleepy and tired all afternoon. Next time I won't excercise during lunch time. Today's dinner is shabu-shabi. Do you know it? Have you ever eaten shabu-shabu? Shabu-shabu is a Japanese dish. It is thinly sliced beef boiled in water.

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