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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 02. 09 조회 13651

My job

작성자: 1102047434 담당 튜터: Abby
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I am a software engineer in the Operating Group.
My main role as engineer is to manage application named Papergarden in Samsung cellular phone. This application provides magazine contents in mobile. Thus, I spend a lot of time with software program and try to improve development skill in my field.
During my lunch break, I usually stroll around company. Because I work at indoor office , It makes me stuffy. So walking around company is very helpful for me and I feel refreshed after walking.
These days, Even though I have to work overtime several times a week, I really enjoy my job.
튜터 교정 답변

I am a software engineer in the Operating Group. My main role as an engineer is to manage the application named Papergarden in Samsung cellular phone. This application provides magazine contents in mobile. Thus, I spend a lot of time with software program and try to improve development skill in my field. During my lunch break, I usually stroll around the company. Because I work at indoor office , it makes me stuffy. So walking around the company is very helpful for me and I feel refreshed after walking. These days, even though I have to work overtime several times a week, I really enjoy my job.

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Hi,

I think you've gotten a great job. Just enjoy what you're doing now! See you in class!

Abby

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