Last weekend 2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Sunday, I had to go to mom's home.
Because She has been sick for 4 weeks since She had her right arm broken.
and serval days ago, She got cold.
She said Sometimes Her temperature rose suddenly and it mad her hard.
I got up almost 10 o'clock am because I went to the bed at 2 o'clock AM.
It was too late to go to mom's house but I had to go.
When my mom saw me, She was very surprised and looked happy.
I thought I did good job.
After I ate dinner with mom and brother, I got home at 9 o'clock PM and I had to drive for 5 hours.
It was hard to wait for this class.
Because She has been sick for 4 weeks since She had her right arm broken.
and serval days ago, She got cold.
She said Sometimes Her temperature rose suddenly and it mad her hard.
I got up almost 10 o'clock am because I went to the bed at 2 o'clock AM.
It was too late to go to mom's house but I had to go.
When my mom saw me, She was very surprised and looked happy.
I thought I did good job.
After I ate dinner with mom and brother, I got home at 9 o'clock PM and I had to drive for 5 hours.
It was hard to wait for this class.
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