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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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Hi, Christine1
I like most Facebook.
I write my story and post potos on Facebook.
I write on Facebook that I want to say and to inform to my freind.
and If I have new information, I write on Facebook.
Because good news and information is that I want to share with eveyone.
In addition, I upload photos of friends, my pictures on Facebook.
I can see what they are up to thest day.
I still keep in touch with my ex-coworker.
I think that I have read various articles on the Facebook, I can be seen that new facts.
Face book is an excellent way to make more personal connection.
Have a good day!
Bye!!
I like most Facebook.
I write my story and post potos on Facebook.
I write on Facebook that I want to say and to inform to my freind.
and If I have new information, I write on Facebook.
Because good news and information is that I want to share with eveyone.
In addition, I upload photos of friends, my pictures on Facebook.
I can see what they are up to thest day.
I still keep in touch with my ex-coworker.
I think that I have read various articles on the Facebook, I can be seen that new facts.
Face book is an excellent way to make more personal connection.
Have a good day!
Bye!!
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