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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
1. Consulting service covers all areas of Supply Chaain Management
-->Consulting service covers all of Supply Chaain Management areas
2. Cello is an integrated platform implemented by using advanced processes and the latest technologiy for an integrated SCL(Supply Chain Logistics) solution supporting global logistics.
---> Cello is an integrated platform implementing by using advanced processes and the state of art technology for an all SCL(Supply Chain Logistics) solution to support global logistics
3. ---> With Cello, we have delivered valuable supply chain logistics benefits to more than 140 customers and 450 consulting and implementation projects in various industires.
4.--->Samsung SDS has contributed to SEC(Samsung Electronics Company) as a one of the top leaders in the world
5. --> Cello is the best solution for maximizing user-friendly UI based on HTML5
-->Consulting service covers all of Supply Chaain Management areas
2. Cello is an integrated platform implemented by using advanced processes and the latest technologiy for an integrated SCL(Supply Chain Logistics) solution supporting global logistics.
---> Cello is an integrated platform implementing by using advanced processes and the state of art technology for an all SCL(Supply Chain Logistics) solution to support global logistics
3. ---> With Cello, we have delivered valuable supply chain logistics benefits to more than 140 customers and 450 consulting and implementation projects in various industires.
4.--->Samsung SDS has contributed to SEC(Samsung Electronics Company) as a one of the top leaders in the world
5. --> Cello is the best solution for maximizing user-friendly UI based on HTML5
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