Cooking
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I like cooking Italian cuisine becasuse I love Spaghetti and pizza.
I used to go to an family restaurant often, but evey time I went there,
it cost a lot of money.
So I decided to cook spaghetti myself.
I bought Spaghetti noodle and tomato sauce in supermarkets.
First, Boil the Spaghetti noddle for about 5 minutes,
Next, Put the sauce and Spaghetti noddle and fry in the frypan.
This is the end. It's very simple. The taste is very good.
The most important thing in this dish is moderately boiling Spaghetti noodle.
Next week, I'm planning to cook cheese pizza.
tha's all.
I used to go to an family restaurant often, but evey time I went there,
it cost a lot of money.
So I decided to cook spaghetti myself.
I bought Spaghetti noodle and tomato sauce in supermarkets.
First, Boil the Spaghetti noddle for about 5 minutes,
Next, Put the sauce and Spaghetti noddle and fry in the frypan.
This is the end. It's very simple. The taste is very good.
The most important thing in this dish is moderately boiling Spaghetti noodle.
Next week, I'm planning to cook cheese pizza.
tha's all.
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