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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 02. 12 조회 13802

Cooking

작성자: 1100817829 담당 튜터: Christine1
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I like cooking Italian cuisine becasuse I love Spaghetti and pizza.
I used to go to an family restaurant often, but evey time I went there,
it cost a lot of money.
So I decided to cook spaghetti myself.
I bought Spaghetti noodle and tomato sauce in supermarkets.
First, Boil the Spaghetti noddle for about 5 minutes,
Next, Put the sauce and Spaghetti noddle and fry in the frypan.
This is the end. It's very simple. The taste is very good.

The most important thing in this dish is moderately boiling Spaghetti noodle.
Next week, I'm planning to cook cheese pizza.
tha's all.
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I like cooking Italian cuisine because I love spaghetti and pizza. I used to go to a family restaurant often but every time I go there, it cost a lot of money so I've  decided to cook spaghetti myself. I bought spaghetti noodles and tomato sauce from the supermarket. First, I boil the spaghetti noodles for about 5 minutes; Next, I put the sauce and spaghetti noodles in a frying pan and fry for a few minutes. Cooking spaghetti noodles is very simple, and the taste is very good. The most important thing about this dish is to boil the spaghetti noodles moderately. Next week, I'm planning to cook cheese pizza.

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