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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 02. 12 조회 13175

unit 16 marketing campaign

작성자: 1100834482 담당 튜터: Wynston1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
1. charge
- i take charge of audit and inspection in my campany which was made by government funding

2. nerveous
- i was a little nervous because of unconvenient face of my boss from early morning

3. decision
- it is very important for leader to make a decision properly for the sake of preparing future risk

4. complain
- what some people make a complaint occurs unnecessary conflict

5. favor
- i visited my girl friend to ask her of favor

6. borrow
- could i borrow some money to pay tuitin fee of university>
튜터 교정 답변

1. charge - i take charge of audit and inspection in my campany which was made by government funding  ** MY DUTY IS TO TAKE CHARGE OF AUDIT AND INSPECTION IN MY COMPANY

2. nerveous NERVOUS - i was a little nervous because of unconvenient face of my boss from early morning  ** I WAS NERVOUS WHEN I SAW THE SERIOUS LOOK ON MY BOSS'S FACE

3. decision - it is very important for leader to make a decision properly for the sake of preparing future risk   **  IT IS VERY IMPORTANT FOR A LEADER TO MAKE PROPER DECISIONS TO AVOID FUTURE RISK

4. complain - what some people make a complaint occurs unnecessary conflict  **  SOME PEOPLE COMPLAIN UNNECESSARILY

5. favor - i visited my girl friend to ask her of A favor  

6. borrow - could i borrow some money to pay tuitin fee of university  ** COULD I BORROW SOME MONEY TO PAY MY UNIVERSITY TUITION?

 

Tiger ... REMEMBER TO USE A QUESTION MARK (?) WNEH ASKING A QUESTION

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