unit 17 chatting on economy
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
1. terrible
- recent economic inequality of income situation of south korea is terrible according to the material issuedd by OECD, in paticular inequality of income
2. worse
- the physical appearance of father of my coworker was worse than the weeks ago
3. choke
- the planning anc financial government have choked off the increase rate of public institution. so the level of th workers of public institution was less than that of big private company
4. inflation
- as the possibility of occuranc of deplation increase in south korea, i concern that the influenc of that could be destructive than that of inflation because of terrible experienc of big deplation in 1929.
5. positive
- although bad things take place, you should keep in mind the importance of lovers, for example family.
6. debt
- it is essential that the management of expense of money than earning money is important to less your debt.
5.
- recent economic inequality of income situation of south korea is terrible according to the material issuedd by OECD, in paticular inequality of income
2. worse
- the physical appearance of father of my coworker was worse than the weeks ago
3. choke
- the planning anc financial government have choked off the increase rate of public institution. so the level of th workers of public institution was less than that of big private company
4. inflation
- as the possibility of occuranc of deplation increase in south korea, i concern that the influenc of that could be destructive than that of inflation because of terrible experienc of big deplation in 1929.
5. positive
- although bad things take place, you should keep in mind the importance of lovers, for example family.
6. debt
- it is essential that the management of expense of money than earning money is important to less your debt.
5.
튜터 교정 답변
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