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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 02. 16 조회 13627

unit 18 leaking problem

작성자: 1100834482 담당 튜터: Wynston2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
1. leak
if housewife turns on the water tap without sotpping, lots of water will leak on the floor

2. sink
it is very difficult to pull uo the sunken ship above water

3. perish
after big fire brought out in mountain, many wild lives were perished

4. seal
when someone send post, they don't forger the seal of the post

5. continuous
continuous typing would bring out physical disorder

6. brought
my wife brought chocolate box to me to celebrate balentine day
튜터 교정 답변

1. leak if housewife turns on the water tap without sotpping, lots of water will leak on the floor   IF MY WIFE DOESN'T TURN THE TAP OFF, WATER WILL LEAK ONTO THE FLOOR

2. sink it is very difficult to pull uo the sunken ship above water   IT IS VERY DIFFICULT TO SINK LARGE SHIPS

3. perish after big fire brought out in mountain, many wild lives were perished  MANY PEOPLE WILL PERISH IF THEY GET CAUGHT IN THE MOUNTAIN FIRE

4. seal when someone send post, they don't forger the seal of the post   WHEN SENDING MAIL, REMEMBER TO SEAL THE ENVELOP

5. continuous continuous typing would bring out physical disorder   CONTNUOUS TYPING COULD CAUSE ACHING FINGERS

6. brought my wife brought chocolate box to me to celebrate balentine day  MY WIFE BROUGHT HOME SOME CHOCOLATE TO CELEBRATE VALENTINE'S DAY WITH ME

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