Furniture 3
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Actually this is not an interesting topic to me but I'll review what we learned today.
As my kids grow up, we feel like we really need bookcases at home.
Actually one of my or my wife's daily or regular duties is searching for useful book series such as
famous fairy tales or greatest people in Korean History.
I thought it is needed that we go and visit the furniture store and get items
but in case of bookcase all we need are the sizes and the colors.
Of course the main materials or solidity of the bookcase are also important but
we can easily get the information from the online store web pages and
if we have a problem from items we buy we can easily ask for a refund or exchange.
Now we have 4 bookcases in the living room and I like the color and the style of them.
As my kids grow up, we feel like we really need bookcases at home.
Actually one of my or my wife's daily or regular duties is searching for useful book series such as
famous fairy tales or greatest people in Korean History.
I thought it is needed that we go and visit the furniture store and get items
but in case of bookcase all we need are the sizes and the colors.
Of course the main materials or solidity of the bookcase are also important but
we can easily get the information from the online store web pages and
if we have a problem from items we buy we can easily ask for a refund or exchange.
Now we have 4 bookcases in the living room and I like the color and the style of them.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!