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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 02. 24 조회 12987

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작성자: 1100817829 담당 튜터: Christine1
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My company is an IT professional.
Company field is security and finance IT.
My company has a lot of security products and financial services.
My major is computer science so I have to work here.
I was ten years worked.
I am developing an online banking service using Object C, JAVA and C#
Object C, JAVA and C# are one of serveral programming languages.
My compnay has been growing steadily.
Employees are alos increasing every year.
Now about 200 people.
I am very fun to work together with my team.
My team is 10 people.
튜터 교정 답변

My company is an IT professional company .Our main focus is in the field of IT security and finance. My company manufactures a lot of security products and provides financial services for several clients. My major is computer science so I have to work here. I have worked at this company for ten years and I am currently developing an online banking service using Object C JAVA, C# Object C. JAVA and C# are one of several programming language. My company has been growing steadily, and employees are also increasing every year. Currently, about 200 people are working at my company. I have fun working together with my team. My team consists of 10 people.

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