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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 02. 25 조회 13810

Is it correct sentence? please check it.

작성자: 1102020519 담당 튜터: Celine
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-> what is correct?

1. He is so good in every character he play.
2. He is so good in every character he played.

-> check sentence
3. Nowdays, He was commit a crime for young people, even though his wife was pregnant.

regards.
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CORRECTIONS:

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-> what is correct? 

>> What is correct? 

1. He is so good in every character he play. 

>> He is so good in every character he plays.


2. He is so good in every character he played. 

>> Correct Sentence.


-> check sentence

>> Check the sentence.


3. Nowdays, He was commit a crime for young people, even though his wife was pregnant. 

>> Nowadays, He was committing a crime for young people, even though his wife is pregnant.



regards.

>> Regards.

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>> Hello Leo, thank you for your diary. Take care!

-T. Celine^^

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