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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 02. 27 조회 13863

last day of January

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Hi, Love

it is already the last day of this month.
Originally we will have a schedule to study about ice cream.

It is a very interesting story. At first to eat ice cream people had to lick the dishes with ice cream. In hot summer, the dishes not be washed...oh, i dont want to image such things.

An immigrant from Italy invented a cone with wapple. He wraped warm wapple into like a cup.
It was a origin of ice cream. Very interesting, arent you?
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Hi, Love it is already the last day of this month. Originally we will have a schedule to study about ice cream. It is a very interesting story. At first to eat ice cream people had to lick the dishes with ice cream. In hot summer, the dishes not be washed...oh, i dont want to image such things. An immigrant from Italy invented a cone with wapple. He wraped warm wapple into like a cup. It was a origin of ice cream. Very interesting, arent you?

 

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-> Firstly, to eat ice cream people had to lick the dishes with ice cream. have to lick the ice cream off the dishes / wash the dishes used for the ice cream.

->  In hot summer, the dishes are sometimes unwashed.

-> Oh, I dont want to imagine such things.

-> An immigrant from Italy invented a cone with waffle.

-> He rolled a warm waffle in a shape of a cone.

->  It was the origin of ice cream. Very interesting, isn't it?

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Hi James,

Thank you for your composition and for sharing some information about the origin of ice cream and cone. It's really interesting how it was made and I think eating ice cream in a cone is the best. See you next time James! enjoy your weekend! smiley

 

 

 

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