last day of January
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Hi, Love
it is already the last day of this month.
Originally we will have a schedule to study about ice cream.
It is a very interesting story. At first to eat ice cream people had to lick the dishes with ice cream. In hot summer, the dishes not be washed...oh, i dont want to image such things.
An immigrant from Italy invented a cone with wapple. He wraped warm wapple into like a cup.
It was a origin of ice cream. Very interesting, arent you?
it is already the last day of this month.
Originally we will have a schedule to study about ice cream.
It is a very interesting story. At first to eat ice cream people had to lick the dishes with ice cream. In hot summer, the dishes not be washed...oh, i dont want to image such things.
An immigrant from Italy invented a cone with wapple. He wraped warm wapple into like a cup.
It was a origin of ice cream. Very interesting, arent you?
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