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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 03. 18 조회 12567

Thanks. My teacher.

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Hi! Teacher.

At 'the listening class record' in this system,
I listened about this Tuesday's talking contents.
My grammar and pronunciation is appalling.
I, myself, can't comprehension my speech.
Like that, how you could understand my speech !
OK, I will try.

Next topic is 'watching sports'.
In textbook, I read the question.
My answer are as below.
1. When was the first time. In middle school.
2. With whom ? With my classmate.
3. Where is the stadium ? Dong-dae-mun Baseball stadium In Seoul.
Now that stadium is become shopping moll.
3. How was the experience.
That game was Middle school tournament game.
My supporting team lost the game but It is very interesting sing a fight song and cheer motion together.

thanks.
see you this Thursday.
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CORRECTION:

Hi! Teacher. I listened to our class recording for our Tuesday's class. My grammar and pronunciation are appalling. I, myself, can't comprehend my speech. In that case, how you could understand my speech! OK, I will try. Next topic is 'Watching Sports'. In the textbook, I read the question. My answers are as below. 1. When was the first time? In middle school. 2. With whom? With my classmate. 3. Where is the stadium? Dong-dae-mun Baseball stadium in Seoul. Now, that stadium becomes a shopping mall. 3. How was the experience? That game was a middle school tournament game. My supporting team lost the game but it was very interesting to sing "Fight, fight, fight" and cheer for them together. Thanks. See you this Thursday.

 

COMMENT:

Hello there, Jun! I'm glad because you followed my advice which is for you to listen to our class recording. I recommend you to do that so you will have an idea about our class flow and how did our class go. Also, it's a good way for you to improve your listening and comprehension skills as well. Don't feel so disappointed in yourself. Please do remember that learning English is not that very busy for non-native speakers like us. It takes a lot of time and patience before you are able to get a hang of it. You just have to practice a lot. You should be confident whenever you speak in English not just in our class but also with other people too. Keep it up! I know you can do it.

See you on Thursday,

Teacher Mitch ^^

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