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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 03. 03 조회 13303

Walking to work

작성자: 119846 담당 튜터: Jennifer1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I park my car thirty minutes distance from company. So, After finishing our class, I have to walk to work for thirty minutes. Due to the lack of time of exercising, I am very thanksful for my walking time. And as I am walking, I feel the power of legs, and I feel my legs get strong.
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My car is parked thirty minutes from my job.  So, after finishing our class, I have to walk thirty minutes to work.  Due to my busy schedule, I don't have much time to exercise.  I am very thankful for this walking time.  As I am walking, I can feel my legs getting stronger. 

 

 

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