Self Intorduction
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I think I was a optimistic and outgoing person that liked to meet people and talk with them.
I also seemed to be a very talkitive and not to think something more serious. Especially I didn't like to write anything such as reports, essaies, letters and etc.
I had a tend to think a conclusion hurrily or to ignore the procedures about 2 - 3 years ago. Because it was convenient to me personally.
But these days I think my personailty got changed much. How?
I think more seriously something than before for example What happened, Why happened and How can I deliver that circumstances and information well and effciently to my boss or the concerned people.
I don't hate to change my personality. because It's fun to analyze my work and incidents to happen. And it gives me a good time to think more serious about something.
Thinking... Even though it often gives me a stress to write or report about something, on the contrary I think it gives me a good pleasure about how to think.
I also seemed to be a very talkitive and not to think something more serious. Especially I didn't like to write anything such as reports, essaies, letters and etc.
I had a tend to think a conclusion hurrily or to ignore the procedures about 2 - 3 years ago. Because it was convenient to me personally.
But these days I think my personailty got changed much. How?
I think more seriously something than before for example What happened, Why happened and How can I deliver that circumstances and information well and effciently to my boss or the concerned people.
I don't hate to change my personality. because It's fun to analyze my work and incidents to happen. And it gives me a good time to think more serious about something.
Thinking... Even though it often gives me a stress to write or report about something, on the contrary I think it gives me a good pleasure about how to think.
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