unit 9. Photography 2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I have a memorable experience of taking pictures that I've had.
About 5 years ago, I went to Saipan on journey with my family.
As you may know, there are a lot of fabulous and fantastic places to take pictures.
It was a suiside Cliff maybe as far as I can remember the name.
As we were told about the place from the tour guide,
If you see the ocean from far right side to far left side, you can feel that
the horizontal line looks curve rather than straight line.
It was like we were far away from the earth so that we can see the earth as like a ball.
It was so surprising and I was too stupefied to look after my family.
It really was a terrific scenery.
About 5 years ago, I went to Saipan on journey with my family.
As you may know, there are a lot of fabulous and fantastic places to take pictures.
It was a suiside Cliff maybe as far as I can remember the name.
As we were told about the place from the tour guide,
If you see the ocean from far right side to far left side, you can feel that
the horizontal line looks curve rather than straight line.
It was like we were far away from the earth so that we can see the earth as like a ball.
It was so surprising and I was too stupefied to look after my family.
It really was a terrific scenery.
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!