upset and fighting
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I bought an apartment last month. I like the town due to the traffic convenience and beautiful scenery.
I often visit a real estate website which is the biggest website among that kind of website in Korea.
Yesterday, I read an article that somebody said that the town is strongly assumed that the air is polluted by the find dust.
But that is not true. Because I have been lived in this region more than forty years.
I argued by replying to the article to keep the value of my apartment safe.
I often visit a real estate website which is the biggest website among that kind of website in Korea.
Yesterday, I read an article that somebody said that the town is strongly assumed that the air is polluted by the find dust.
But that is not true. Because I have been lived in this region more than forty years.
I argued by replying to the article to keep the value of my apartment safe.
튜터 교정 답변
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