Hello Patrick! This is Choi!
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Maybe If you don't know who am I, because you have many students.
Please remember that we had a long time class 25 mins at 10 pm(KT) last few weeks.
That was going on two class continuously.
Ye! It's me Choi.
I'm Very Thank you for your listening in spite of my poor English.
You are GREAT TEACHER and You are good friend to me.
Oh! Today is last time for our class. I'm so sad I can't hear your voice anymore!!
I know that you are going to Japan with your girl friend. Great!!
and we will more close when you are in Japan.
Oh I Got A Big Plan. The next year 2016 My family will visite Japan with my parents.
I strongly want to meet you if you are in Japan on that day.
Also I want to keep in touch with you from time to time.
If you courteously and carefully OK, Please tell me your E-MAIL address.
Thank you very much and meet at 10pm.....
Bye
Your Studennt Choi...
Please remember that we had a long time class 25 mins at 10 pm(KT) last few weeks.
That was going on two class continuously.
Ye! It's me Choi.
I'm Very Thank you for your listening in spite of my poor English.
You are GREAT TEACHER and You are good friend to me.
Oh! Today is last time for our class. I'm so sad I can't hear your voice anymore!!
I know that you are going to Japan with your girl friend. Great!!
and we will more close when you are in Japan.
Oh I Got A Big Plan. The next year 2016 My family will visite Japan with my parents.
I strongly want to meet you if you are in Japan on that day.
Also I want to keep in touch with you from time to time.
If you courteously and carefully OK, Please tell me your E-MAIL address.
Thank you very much and meet at 10pm.....
Bye
Your Studennt Choi...
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