Today's story
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Dear Sir
First of all, I'm sorry about miss your call in today's morning.
In truth yesterday I had a dinner event for celebration about Promoted staff
so, I drunk some beer and I came back home too late
so, I missed your call
I usually go to work and had no difference.
but afternoon I went to doctor because The cold is not better for a long time
I asked the doctor about the medicine is effectual for me?
Doctor said to me it is good to change them.
so I got some new medicine for 5 days.
Now I hope it will be better until this weekend.
See you soon
Yours sincerely Luise
First of all, I'm sorry about miss your call in today's morning.
In truth yesterday I had a dinner event for celebration about Promoted staff
so, I drunk some beer and I came back home too late
so, I missed your call
I usually go to work and had no difference.
but afternoon I went to doctor because The cold is not better for a long time
I asked the doctor about the medicine is effectual for me?
Doctor said to me it is good to change them.
so I got some new medicine for 5 days.
Now I hope it will be better until this weekend.
See you soon
Yours sincerely Luise
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