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It is script about traditional holidays. Please modify :-)
In Korea There are two big traditional holidays.
Among them I will introduce Seol-Nal. It is similar to New years day.
In Seol-Nal All families get together. Also we visit ancestor's grave.
Seeing full-moon we pray peace for each other.
Usually in seol-nal most people play traditional called Yut.
It use 4 wood-sticks. Each person has horses. as conclusion of through 4 wood-sticks,
they can move horses.
Also we eat korean traditional food Dduk-kook.
I think it is big bless having traditional holidays.
In Korea There are two big traditional holidays.
Among them I will introduce Seol-Nal. It is similar to New years day.
In Seol-Nal All families get together. Also we visit ancestor's grave.
Seeing full-moon we pray peace for each other.
Usually in seol-nal most people play traditional called Yut.
It use 4 wood-sticks. Each person has horses. as conclusion of through 4 wood-sticks,
they can move horses.
Also we eat korean traditional food Dduk-kook.
I think it is big bless having traditional holidays.
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