Hi Suzan!!
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
It's great that I get to know you.
I thought it's perfect time to meet you because I am planning to stay in Washington D.C for two years since July. I am really excited to dwell at there. Mission coordinator will be my job at there. My company is sending me to U.S for tranning to develop my abillities that is associated with our works. As you know I am a civil servant and work at Geoungbuk province office. So I have to consider always what I can do for our citizen. Anyway, I am delighted when I think to meet you in Washington D.C. See you soon.~~~
I thought it's perfect time to meet you because I am planning to stay in Washington D.C for two years since July. I am really excited to dwell at there. Mission coordinator will be my job at there. My company is sending me to U.S for tranning to develop my abillities that is associated with our works. As you know I am a civil servant and work at Geoungbuk province office. So I have to consider always what I can do for our citizen. Anyway, I am delighted when I think to meet you in Washington D.C. See you soon.~~~
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