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Hi Suzan!!

작성자: 1100422269 담당 튜터: Suzan2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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It's great that I get to know you.
I thought it's perfect time to meet you because I am planning to stay in Washington D.C for two years since July. I am really excited to dwell at there. Mission coordinator will be my job at there. My company is sending me to U.S for tranning to develop my abillities that is associated with our works. As you know I am a civil servant and work at Geoungbuk province office. So I have to consider always what I can do for our citizen. Anyway, I am delighted when I think to meet you in Washington D.C. See you soon.~~~
튜터 교정 답변

Grace, I also am very excited that you are coming to Washington DC soon.  I hope I can help you get ready for your new position here.  Please let me know of any help or information that I can provide.  I look forward to speaking with you this month, and most of all to meeting you when you arrive here this summer!

Suzie

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It's great that I get to know you. I thought it's perfect time to meet you because I am planning to stay in Washington D.C for two years since July. I am really excited to dwell at there. Mission coordinator will be my job at there. My company is sending me to U.S for tranning to develop my abillities that is associated with our works. As you know I am a civil servant and work at Geoungbuk province office. So I have to consider always what I can do for our citizen. Anyway, I am delighted when I think to meet you in Washington D.C. See you soon.~~~

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