Please correct the mistakes if there are any ^^
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
< Self-Introduction >
Hi, my name is jun hee Lee and I am 26 years old.
I am working at a construction and service company which is located in Yangjae in Seoul Korea and I’ve been working at this company for 6 months. I’m an air conditioning engineer.
I live in Seoul with my friend, and I have lived here almost one year. but I was born in Busan which is located in the south of korea.
I’m a considerate and optimistic, so everyone around me wants to pour out their troubles to me.
Whenever they come to me pour out their trouble, I’m willing to listen to them.
My hobby is listening music and singing a song. Because music makes me happy so much. Whenever I take the bus or subway, I like to relax with the music.
At last, I love studying English, so I hope OPIC test could be good chance to study English for me and would be more self-motivated than before.
Thank you for listening to my introduction.
Hi, my name is jun hee Lee and I am 26 years old.
I am working at a construction and service company which is located in Yangjae in Seoul Korea and I’ve been working at this company for 6 months. I’m an air conditioning engineer.
I live in Seoul with my friend, and I have lived here almost one year. but I was born in Busan which is located in the south of korea.
I’m a considerate and optimistic, so everyone around me wants to pour out their troubles to me.
Whenever they come to me pour out their trouble, I’m willing to listen to them.
My hobby is listening music and singing a song. Because music makes me happy so much. Whenever I take the bus or subway, I like to relax with the music.
At last, I love studying English, so I hope OPIC test could be good chance to study English for me and would be more self-motivated than before.
Thank you for listening to my introduction.
튜터 교정 답변
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