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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 04. 01 조회 12519

new start

작성자: 1100160835 담당 튜터: Michelle
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I usually register in English class every month to enhance my English skill.
I am motivated at first of month, but it gets loose as time goes by end of month.
I guess it's because I don't have any specific plan and goal about it.
I just enroll class without specific goals how , why, for what..

Let's make goals more detail and make it~
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I usually register in English class every month to enhance my English skill. I am motivated at first of month, but it gets loose as time goes by end of month. I guess it's because I don't have any specific plan and goal about it. I just enroll class without specific goals how , why, for what.. Let's make goals more detail and make it~

 

CORRECTIONS:

I usually register in English class every month to enhance my English skill. = √

I am motivated at first of month, but it gets loose as time goes by end of month.

►I am motivated at first of month, I am motivated during the first month, but it gets loose as time goes by end of month. but it becomes reasonless as time goes by.

I guess it's because I don't have any specific plan and goal about it. = √

I just enroll class without specific goals how , why, for what..

► I just enroll class without specific goals how , why, for what..I just enroll the class without any speciafic goals of how,why and for what reason.

Let's make goals more detail and make it~

►Let's make goals more detail and make it~ Let's make goals in details and make it achieve.

 

REPLY:

Hi! Robin, I am so happy that now you are more focus and motivated why do you want to enhance your English skill and learn more. It only shows that you're really a good student and you want to prove something. I hope that attitude of your will be consistent because I know that you have the potential to become a good English speaker. Don't worry all your hard work will pay off. Just belive in yourself. =)
 

--Teacher Michelle",)

 

 

 

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