Shopping
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Ok, I'd like tell you about my shopping place.
My favorite shopping place is Myeong-Dong. There are many clothing and accessory stroes.
Not only they are trendly but also inexpensive.
I go shopping once a month with my brother. On the last weekend of the month, we go to
Myeong-Dong together. We try clothes on and tell each other whether they look good on us or not.
Since there are many restaurant that serve delicious food, we always have a nice dinner after shopping. It's a great place to shop, so I recommend you go there, too.
That's all.
My favorite shopping place is Myeong-Dong. There are many clothing and accessory stroes.
Not only they are trendly but also inexpensive.
I go shopping once a month with my brother. On the last weekend of the month, we go to
Myeong-Dong together. We try clothes on and tell each other whether they look good on us or not.
Since there are many restaurant that serve delicious food, we always have a nice dinner after shopping. It's a great place to shop, so I recommend you go there, too.
That's all.
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