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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 04. 01 조회 13951

hello angela

작성자: 72664 담당 튜터: Angela
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Dear Angela,

I am sorry that telephone call is cut.
My office was very noisy.
and I was not able to understand your voice well.
I look for a quiet place from tomorrow and talk on the telephone.

Thank you

Neo.
튜터 교정 답변

Hello Neo!

Thanks for informing me.I understand the situation.Anyway,I noticed that you made good sentences here in your message but there are just some corrections.Good Job!

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Dear Angela,

I am sorry that telephone call is cut.  (I'm sorry that the telephone call was cut.)
My office was very noisy.(Good sentence !)
and I was not able to understand your voice well. ( You can also say like :My office was very noisy and I wasn't able to understand your voice well.)
I look for a quiet place from tomorrow and talk on the telephone.(I will  look for a quiet place tomorrow and will talk to you on the telephone.)

Thank you

Neo.

 

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