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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 04. 01 조회 14106

1 April

작성자: 1100048900 담당 튜터: Cecile1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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Hi teacher.
I'd like to introduce myself to you.
My Korean name is Kwag Dong Hoon and English name is Ryan.

I've been working as IT engineer in Samsung SDS for 8 years.
I worked in several small IT company before I came to Samsung SDS.
As many people knows, my compnay is a leader of IT industry in Korea.
There are about 14,000 employees over the world.
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Hi teacher.

I'd like to introduce myself to you. My Korean name is Kwag Dong Hoon and my English name is Ryan.

I've been working as an IT engineer in Samsung SDS for 8 years.

I worked in several small IT company before I came to Samsung SDS.

As many people knows, my compnay company is a leader of in IT industry in Korea. There are about 14,000 employees over the world.

 

Hi Ryan,

I heard a lot about your company and I think you are right. Samsung is a well known company not only in your country but in other countries as well. Just keep going and do your job well to impress your boss ^^. Thanks for sharing some information about you and your job. Have a great day!

Cecile ^_^

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