A self-introduction
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
hello !
Hello!
I introduce my-self.
My name is Yongsub Kyeong.
And nick name(English name) is Young. So, please just call me 'Young'.
I was born in Kimje city near by Junju city, north Julla province in 1962.
I'm 53 years old. I graduated Hanyang graduated shool in 2012
I studied specially, power engineering of electric field in the graduated school.
My hobby is excise, playing tennis, golf and baseball.
I have been worked in KPLI(Korea Power Learning Institute) since december last year.
KPLI teaches and supports all of the knowledge about power plant to applicants
It is located at Tae-an gun south chung-cheong province
4-months ago, I worked the thermal power plant at Inchon. power plant produces electricity.
I have 3 family, wife, an elder daughter, and another is a son.
They live in namyangju city, gyeonggi province.
My wife's hobby is playing golf too. she is better player than me playing golf.
I lost my money 10,000 won to my wife for screen golf last saturday.
My daughter teachs national language in the middle school. Her hobby is reading a book.
And my son goes to Korea university in seoul. His major is speech and media department.
He is a junior at university.
Hello!
I introduce my-self.
My name is Yongsub Kyeong.
And nick name(English name) is Young. So, please just call me 'Young'.
I was born in Kimje city near by Junju city, north Julla province in 1962.
I'm 53 years old. I graduated Hanyang graduated shool in 2012
I studied specially, power engineering of electric field in the graduated school.
My hobby is excise, playing tennis, golf and baseball.
I have been worked in KPLI(Korea Power Learning Institute) since december last year.
KPLI teaches and supports all of the knowledge about power plant to applicants
It is located at Tae-an gun south chung-cheong province
4-months ago, I worked the thermal power plant at Inchon. power plant produces electricity.
I have 3 family, wife, an elder daughter, and another is a son.
They live in namyangju city, gyeonggi province.
My wife's hobby is playing golf too. she is better player than me playing golf.
I lost my money 10,000 won to my wife for screen golf last saturday.
My daughter teachs national language in the middle school. Her hobby is reading a book.
And my son goes to Korea university in seoul. His major is speech and media department.
He is a junior at university.
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