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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 04. 20 조회 13021

Using positive attitude

작성자: pos621357 담당 튜터: Wynston2
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We need to have a positive attitude whenever we feel depressed from a gloomy situation.
Making a good friend can help us to feel better.
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We need to have a positive attitude whenever we feel depressed from a gloomy situation. Making a good friend can help us to feel better.

 

I TOTALLY AGREE.  HOWEVER, OUR HAPPINESS OR MISERY DOES NOT COME FROM THE OUTSIDE ... AS WE ARE 100% RESPONSIBLE FOR BOTH:) READ MY BOOK ...

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