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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 04. 24 조회 12280

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작성자: 1102220679 담당 튜터: Garrett1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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I wanted to say as follows:

In the nineties, his movies were particular in terms of both line and story. But his movies have changed being ordinary as other's movies.

Also, he had sharp eyes and his face looked like a fighter. But now, his appearance has become mild as his movie did.

Maybe as his mental has normalized, his movie and appearance also changed together. :)
In Korean proverb, people's face is changing according to attitude and mental as getting older.
The pesonality of Tarantino may has become mild. ha ha

Anyway, I thanks to him because he let me something different experience by movie.

Best,
튜터 교정 답변

I wanted to say as follows: In the nineties, his movies were particular in terms of both lines and story. But his movies have changed to being as ordinary. Also, he had sharp eyes and his face looked like that of a fighter. But now, his appearance has become as mild as his movies. Maybe as his mind has settled, his movies and appearance have also changed. :) In Korean proverbs, a person's face changes according to their attitude and thoughs as they get older. The pesonality of Tarantino may have become mild. Ha ha! Anyway, I thank him because he lets me experience something different in a movie.

 

Best,

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