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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 04. 02 조회 13770

your nick name reminds me another teacher

작성자: 119046 담당 튜터: Chel
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Hi Chel,

When you told me your name is Rachel or Ritchell and Chel is a nick name, I was suprised.
I know a good teacher whose name was Ritchell. We met in January in phone english class.
I confused to figure out whether you are the same teacher or not.
I think that you are the another good teacher who has the similar nick name.
If you know her well, Please say hello to her and I got the OPIC IH level last month
thanks to her nice teaching.
Moving on, nice to see you Chel and I wish I will recive many corrections and revisons from you.

Thanks,
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Hi Chel, When you told me your name is Rachel or Ritchell and Chel is a nick name, I was suprised.

>Hi Chel, When you told me your name is Rachel or Ritchell and Chel is your nick name, I was suprised.

I know a good teacher whose name was Ritchell.

>I know a good teacher named Ritchell.

We met in January in phone english class.

>We met in January in phone English class.

I confused to figure out whether you are the same teacher or not.

>I confused and I couldn't figure out if I was talking with the same teacher or not

I think that you are the another good teacher who has the similar nick name.

>I think you are also good teacher like my former teacher .

If you know her well, Please say hello to her and I got the OPIC IH level last month thanks to her nice teaching. Moving on, nice to see you Chel and I wish I will recive many corrections and revisons from you. Thanks,

>If you know her well, Please say hello to her and I got the OPIC IH level last month thanks to her nice teaching. Moving on, nice to see you Chel and I wish I will recive many corrections from you. Thanks,

Hi Douglas,

I met teacher Ritchell.She's so happy when I told her about you.She said you're a good and kind student.I would be glad to help you .smiley

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