Liyann, Nice to meet you!!

Yesterday, we had the first class and took the level test.

->Yesterday, we had a level test.

I hope that this class give me a chance improving English dramatically.
->I hope that this class will help me improve my English skills.

 Probabally, in this year or early next year.

->Probably, this year or early next year.

Because of that, I need to improve my English very rapidly.

->Because of that, I need to improve my English skills rapidly.

Hi Peter,

Thanks for writing. Your writing skill is very impressive. And you were also impressive in our class yesterday. Don't worry, I'm here to help you improve your English skills. But of course, you must spend more time in learning the language.

Llyann