introduce
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
my name is Jung Hye In. I'm 26 years old.
I live with my family in Sejong. My family consists of four members. my parents, younger brother and me. I am majoring in public administration at Hankuk University.
I am a senior and expect to graduate in a couple of month.
I want to work in the Human resources department in a public enterprise after graduation. Therefore I need to opic IH level to apply to a public enterprise.
I am outgoing and I like spending time with my friends or family.
As for my hobby, recently I've been into taking pictures. So, I love to visit gorgeous places to take pictures on weekends. This is one of the best ways to blow away my stress related job seeking.
Also, I like to watch a movie. so I usually catch the movie at least once or twice a month bring my boy friend. I have been dating him for six years. Are you suprised?
I live with my family in Sejong. My family consists of four members. my parents, younger brother and me. I am majoring in public administration at Hankuk University.
I am a senior and expect to graduate in a couple of month.
I want to work in the Human resources department in a public enterprise after graduation. Therefore I need to opic IH level to apply to a public enterprise.
I am outgoing and I like spending time with my friends or family.
As for my hobby, recently I've been into taking pictures. So, I love to visit gorgeous places to take pictures on weekends. This is one of the best ways to blow away my stress related job seeking.
Also, I like to watch a movie. so I usually catch the movie at least once or twice a month bring my boy friend. I have been dating him for six years. Are you suprised?
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