Introduce my self
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
My name is Kim Seungjin and I am 38 years old. I originally come from Daegu and I moved to Seoul about 10 years ago after I finished a master’s degree. At master’s degree I studied mobile communication and I have been working for an engineering company on the Suwon. I usually work on design software architecture and programing for new software products. It’s a very interesting job and I’ve learned so much since I joined the company.
튜터 교정 답변
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