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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 05. 06 조회 12804

Thanks a lot

작성자: 1102047524 담당 튜터: KellyR1
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Dear kelly,

Hi!
Did you having a good time?
A while ago, I heard your voice message.
I'm very sorry, I can't answer your call.
Yesterday was Children's day in Korea.
It was a holiday.
So,I got up late..^^
Anyway, You are very kind. Thanks a lot.
I want to speak english well.
keep up the good work!

Thanks~

Sara.
튜터 교정 답변

Dear kelly, Hi! Did you have a good time? A while ago, I heard your voice message. I'm very sorry, I can't answer your call. Yesterday was Children's day in Korea. It was a holiday. So,I got up late..^^ Anyway, You are very kind. Thanks a lot. I want to speak english well. keep up the good work! Thanks~ Sara.

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