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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 05. 06 조회 12966

today's correction

작성자: 1100017643 담당 튜터: Kris2
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At lunch time, I usually go out to have a meal.
At that time, if it rains unexpectedly, I sometimes borrow an umbrella.

Correct those plz.
튜터 교정 답변

At lunch time, I usually go out to have a meal.

better:

During lunch time, I usually go out to have a meal.

 

At that time, if it rains unexpectedly, I sometimes borrow an umbrella.--->correct

 

Correct those plz.

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