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공개 첨삭 완료 2015. 05. 07 조회 14045

Reading newspaper #1

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I try to read newspapers 15min in the morning almost everyday to keep up with the latest news.
Read mainly on social issues, sports and travel information.
Thanks to newspaper, I am always good topics and ideas when talking to colleagues.
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I try to read newspapers 15min in the morning almost everyday to keep up with the latest news. -> I try to read newspapers every morning for 15 minutes to keep me updated in the latest news.

Read mainly on social issues, sports and travel information. -> I only read mainly on social issues, sports and travel information.

Thanks to newspaper, I am always good topics and ideas when talking to colleagues. -> Thanks to the newspaper because I always have good topics and ideas when I talk with my colleagues.



Hi Jeff,

It was a good composition. You were tryong your best in making these sentences. Keep up the good work but remember to use the proper grammar. Anyway, have a good day ahead! ^^,

~Teacher Anne :)

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